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The provided bar chart illustrates about development of city population in some areas of the world aw well as the future estimation of that(from 1950-2030). The data has been calibrated in percentage. At the outset, the eye striking features of graph are that overall population in the world and other given parts will be increased drastically. Even though, Africa and Asia had the least population between 1950 and 2000. With regards to Latin America, it is predicted to state lion’s share in urban populace growth from 60% in 1950 to 80% in 2030, while there will be a minimal difference in the urban people geowth rate between other countries and whole world. On the other hand, in the mid of 20th century, Africa and Asia only around 10% citizens lived in the cities. Whereas, Latin America and Whole world recorded to be 30% and 40% , respectively in the same year. In the case of Africa and Asia, both had the same public, which was recorded as just around 40% in year 2000. In contrast,

The provided bar chart illustrates about development of city population in some areas of the world aw well as the future estimation of that(from 1950-2030). The data has been calibrated in percentage. At the outset, the eye striking features of graph are that overall population in the world and other given parts will be increased drastically. Even though, Africa and Asia had the least population between 1950 and 2000. With regards to Latin America, it is predicted to state lion’s share in urban populace growth from 60% in 1950 to 80% in 2030, while there will be a minimal difference in the urban people geowth rate between other countries and whole world. On the other hand, in the mid of 20th century, Africa and Asia only around 10% citizens lived in the cities. Whereas, Latin America and Whole world recorded to be 30% and 40%, respectively in the same year. In the case of Africa and Asia, both had the same public, which was recorded as just around 40% in year 2000. In contrast, N7aq
The provided bar chart illustrates about development of city population in some areas of the world aw well as the future estimation of that(from 1950-2030). The data has been calibrated in percentage. At the outset, the eye striking features of graph are that overall population in the world and other given parts will be increased drastically. Even though, Africa and Asia had the least population between 1950 and 2000. With regards to Latin America, it is predicted to state lion’s share in urban populace growth from 60% in 1950 to 80% in 2030, while there will be a minimal difference in the urban people geowth rate between other countries and whole world. On the other hand, in the mid of 20th century, Africa and Asia only around 10% citizens lived in the cities. Whereas, Latin America and Whole world recorded to be 30% and 40%, respectively in the same year. In the case of Africa and Asia, both had the same public, which was recorded as just around 40% in year 2000. In contrast, the whole world experienced 10% less than both countries in same year. However, it is going to rise sharply to 70% in future.
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IELTS academic The provided bar chart illustrates about development of city population in some areas of the world aw well as the future estimation of that(from 1950-2030). The data has been calibrated in percentage. At the outset, the eye striking features of graph are that overall population in the world and other given parts will be increased drastically. Even though, Africa and Asia had the least population between 1950 and 2000. With regards to Latin America, it is predicted to state lion’s share in urban populace growth from 60% in 1950 to 80% in 2030, while there will be a minimal difference in the urban people geowth rate between other countries and whole world. On the other hand, in the mid of 20th century, Africa and Asia only around 10% citizens lived in the cities. Whereas, Latin America and Whole world recorded to be 30% and 40%, respectively in the same year. In the case of Africa and Asia, both had the same public, which was recorded as just around 40% in year 2000. In contrast,

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