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the plan below shows the layout of a university's sports centre now,and how it will look after redevelopment.

the plan below shows the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. MgnN

The map detail the present construction of a sports centre and the plan for its renovation. It is noticeable that there is a plan to remove the two outdoor courts and expand the gym space with additional swimming, changing, dancing, and two unrelated activities in an exercise like shopping and having coffee. At the moment, the university's main building is flanked by two large outdoor courts. The plan is two remove the western outdoor courts and it will replace by a leisure pool larger than the current poll which will remain unchanged during refurbishment. The entire main building will not go for alternations including a changing room, reception, and a seating area. The only slight change is that the gym on the northern end of the building will be lengthened eastwards and connect with two new dancing rooms. The outdoor courts on the eastern side will be replaced by a sports hall and on the southeast area will have a changing room with an additional cafeteria to the west. The large entrance area will not exchange in any way but a new sports shop will open next to the changing room in the western part.

The map detail the present construction of a sports Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 and the plan for its renovation. It is noticeable that there is a plan to remove the two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrustic
outdoor
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courts
 and expand the gym space with additional swimming, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuncertaindynamicunstablegrowingchangeabledeveloping
changing
, dancing, and two unrelated activities in an exercise like shopping and having coffee. At the moment, the university's main building is flanked
 by two large You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrustic
outdoor
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courts
. The plan is two remove the western You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrustic
outdoor
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courts
 and it will replace by a leisure pool larger than the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 poll which will remain unchanged during refurbishment. The entire main building will not go for alternations including a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuncertaindynamicunstablegrowingchangeabledeveloping
changing
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room
, reception, and a seating area. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
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only
 slight This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 is that the gym on the northern This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the building will be lengthened
 eastwards and connect with two new dancing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
rooms
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
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outdoor
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courts
 on the eastern side will be replaced
 by a sports hall and on the southeast area will have a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuncertaindynamicunstablegrowingchangeabledeveloping
changing
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room
 with an additional cafeteria to the west. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 large entrance area will not exchange in any way This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 a new sports shop will open next
 to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuncertaindynamicunstablegrowingchangeabledeveloping
changing
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room
 in the western part. 