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the plan below shows the layout of a university's sports centre now,and how it will look after redevelopment.

the plan below shows the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. MgnN
The map detail the present construction of a sports centre and the plan for its renovation. It is noticeable that there is a plan to remove the two outdoor courts and expand the gym space with additional swimming, changing, dancing, and two unrelated activities in an exercise like shopping and having coffee. At the moment, the university's main building is flanked by two large outdoor courts. The plan is two remove the western outdoor courts and it will replace by a leisure pool larger than the current poll which will remain unchanged during refurbishment. The entire main building will not go for alternations including a changing room, reception, and a seating area. The only slight change is that the gym on the northern end of the building will be lengthened eastwards and connect with two new dancing rooms. The outdoor courts on the eastern side will be replaced by a sports hall and on the southeast area will have a changing room with an additional cafeteria to the west. The large entrance area will not exchange in any way but a new sports shop will open next to the changing room in the western part.
The map detail the present construction of a sports
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centre
and the plan for its renovation. It is noticeable that there is a plan to remove the two
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outdoor
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courts
and expand the gym space with additional swimming,
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changing
, dancing, and two unrelated activities in an exercise like shopping and having coffee. At the moment, the university's main building
is flanked
by two large
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outdoor
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courts
. The plan is two remove the western
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outdoor
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courts
and it will replace by a leisure pool larger than the
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current
poll which will remain unchanged during refurbishment. The entire main building will not go for alternations including a
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changing
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room
, reception, and a seating area.
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The
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only
slight
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change
is that the gym on the northern
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end
of the building will
be lengthened
eastwards and connect with two new dancing
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rooms
.
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The
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outdoor
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courts
on the eastern side will
be replaced
by a sports hall and on the southeast area will have a
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changing
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room
with an additional cafeteria to the west.
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The
large entrance area will not exchange in any way
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but
a new sports shop will open
next
to the
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changing
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room
in the western part.

IELTS academic the plan below shows the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

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