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The line graphs show the ridership numbers between 1989 and 2009 and bus and tram passenger numbers from 2000 to 2008 in Melbourne. According to the first graph, it is apparent that the graph showed an upward trend throughout the period.

The line graphs show the ridership numbers between 1989 and 2009 and bus and tram passenger numbers from 2000 to 2008 in Melbourne. According to the first graph, it is apparent that the graph showed an upward trend throughout the period. The number of public transportation passengers remained stable at around 280 million from 1989 to 1994 and had rose to about 370 million over the 10-year period. Also, the numbers increased rapidly to almost 500 million at the end of the period. In the second graph, it is clear that the two graphs had some fluctuation during the 8 years. However, the number of bus users were higher than the number of tram users in 2008. The tram passengers’ numbers were less than 150 million from 2000 to 2002 and grow to over 150 million in 2004, before falling to around 140 million until 2006. Then they rose again to 200 million in 2008. The bus passengers’ numbers were approximately 120 million between 2000 and 2003, but the numbers had a gradual growth from around 120 million to around 250 million over the 5-year, which was the highest number throughout the period.

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graphs
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show
 the ridership You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
numbers
 between 1989 and 2009 and bus and tram You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcustomerfaretouristcommuterpatrontraveler
passenger
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numbers
 from 2000 to 2008 in Melbourne.

According to the first
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graph
, it is apparent that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withchart
graph
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showed
 an upward trend throughout the period.

The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of public transportation You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcustomerfaretouristcommuterpatrontraveler
passengers
 remained stable at You use this word too often, consider replacing it withovereverywhereabout
around
 280 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 from 1989 to 1994 and had rose to about 370 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 over the 10-year period. Also
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
numbers
 increased rapidly
 to almost 500 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the period.

In the second You use this word too often, consider replacing it withchart
graph
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that the two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withchart
graphs
 had This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 fluctuation during the 8 years.

However
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of bus users were higher than the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of tram users in 2008.

The tram You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcustomerfaretouristcommuterpatrontraveler
passengers’
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numbers
 were less than 150 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 from 2000 to 2002 and grow to over 150 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 in 2004, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 falling to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withovereverywhereabout
around
 140 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 until 2006. Then they rose again to 200 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 in 2008. The bus You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcustomerfaretouristcommuterpatrontraveler
passengers’
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numbers
 were approximately 120 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 between 2000 and 2003, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
numbers
 had a gradual growth from You use this word too often, consider replacing it withovereverywhereabout
around
 120 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withovereverywhereabout
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 250 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 over the 5-year, which was the highest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 throughout the period. 