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Comparison of two Maps of airport now and in next year

Comparison of two Maps of airport now and in next year dr12E
The plan illustrates the current layout of an airport and proposals for its redevelopment next year. Overall, the airport is expected to become much bigger with new recreational facilities planned such as bag drop, ATM etc. At present, in the east of the airport, there is a solitary gate for arrivals and toward the rear of the gate, there are passport control customs. Although, in the west of the airport there is one gate for departures and places for café and check-in services. The behind of the check-in place there is security passport control. Furthermore, 8 gates are prepared for passengers. Regarding the future plan, passenger’s entry and exit gates will be doubled and there are plans for new facilities like ATM, car hire services are going to be located in the east side of the airport. Although, café services will be developed at either side of the airport. The bag drop service will be located in the west of the airport. Also, some shops are expected to be built Between gates and security passport control. In addition, the number of gates will be increased from 8 to 18 and a sky train is set to be replaced the walkway to transit passengers between the airport's gate and airplanes.
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current
layout of an
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airport
and proposals for its redevelopment
next
year.
Overall
, the
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airport
is
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expected
to become much bigger with new recreational facilities planned such as bag drop, ATM etc.

At present, in the east of the
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airport
, there is a solitary
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gate
for arrivals and toward the rear of the
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gate
, there are passport control customs. Although, in the west of the
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airport
there is one
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gate
for departures and places for café and
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check
-in
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services
. The behind of the
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check
-in place there is security passport control.
Furthermore
, 8
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gates
are prepared
for passengers.

Regarding the future plan, passenger’s entry and exit
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gates
will
be doubled
and there are plans for new facilities like ATM, car hire
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services
are going to
be located
in the east side of the
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airport
. Although, café
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services
will
be developed
at either side of the
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airport
. The bag drop
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service
will
be located
in the west of the
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airport
.
Also
,
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some
shops are
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expected
to
be built
Between
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gates
and security passport control.
In addition
, the number of
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gates
will
be increased
from 8 to 18 and a sky train
is set
to
be replaced
the walkway to transit passengers between the airport's
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gate
and airplanes.
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IELTS academic Comparison of two Maps of airport now and in next year

Academic
  American English
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209 words
6.5
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