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The survey below shows the result of a survey of young people in four European countries on the most effective solution of global warming.

The survey below shows the result of a survey of young people in four European countries on the most effective solution of global warming. BYWVp
The information regarding the outcome of a survey of young people in distinct four European nations on the best way of global warming is given by the bar graph. Overall, it is lucid that the way of lifestyle has changed the best solution to curb global warming, while none of these factors have minimum support in order to reducing this problem. Primarily, 50% of the Portugal young people is give rated lifestyle changes as a best way for global warming; however, this figure has decreased by government regulations and environment issues, accounting for 20% and around 17%, respectively. Considering to Spain, by changing lifestyle and authority rules, it is superior method, which is recorded about 38% and 18% while, this figure rose slightly to 24% by environmental issues. Moving ahead, 30% of Italy people, they give priority to alter the living standard is a best thing for global warming. Next, there is a dramatic different of 3% in the method of government regulations and environment problems. In terms of Netherlands, first three ways overcome to global warming are good, but it is seen almost stable between 24% and 21% except none of these solutions. Interestingly, the none of others ways give least preference to tackle with this problem.
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IELTS academic The survey below shows the result of a survey of young people in four European countries on the most effective solution of global warming.

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4 paragraphs
208 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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