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The supplied pie charts above illustrate the information about what percentages typical meals contain selected nutrients which may be unhealthy on condition that individuals consume too much, namely, sodium, saturated fat and added sugar in the USA.

The supplied pie charts above illustrate the information about what percentages typical meals contain selected nutrients which may be unhealthy on condition that individuals consume too much, namely, sodium, saturated fat and added sugar in the USA. Ky7yk
The supplied pie charts above illustrate the information about what percentages typical meals contain selected nutrients which may be unhealthy on condition that individuals consume too much, namely, sodium, saturated fat and added sugar in the USA. Overall, what stands out from the charts is that the highest percentage of sodium take place in dinner, whereas the smallest portion of sodium are in snacks and breakfast. Looking at the details, as regards Snacks, this group involves a drastic rate of added sugar than saturated fat and sodium, 42%, 21% and 14%, respectively. With respect to Dinner, as a typical meal, dinner has a dramatic ratio of sodium (43%) rather than other typical meals, and it has a considerable proportion of added sugar(23%) and a significant rate of saturated fat (37%). Regarding Breakfast, interestingly, this option includes these unhealthy nutrients like approximately the same fractions, with 16%. Concerning Lunch, it consists of sodium (29%), saturated fat (26%) and added sugar (19%).
The supplied pie charts above illustrate the information about what percentages typical meals contain selected nutrients which may be unhealthy on condition that individuals consume too much,
namely
, sodium,
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saturated
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Overall
, what stands out from the charts is that the highest percentage of sodium take place in dinner, whereas the smallest portion of sodium are in snacks and breakfast.

Looking at the
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details
, as regards Snacks, this group involves a drastic rate of
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added
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sugar
than
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saturated
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and sodium, 42%, 21% and 14%,
respectively
. With respect to Dinner, as a typical meal, dinner has a dramatic ratio of sodium (43%)
rather
than other typical meals, and it has a considerable proportion of
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added
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sugar(23%)
and a significant rate of
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saturated
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fat
(37%). Regarding Breakfast,
interestingly
, this option includes these unhealthy nutrients like approximately the same fractions, with 16%. Concerning Lunch, it consists of sodium (29%),
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saturated
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fat
(26%) and
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added
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sugar
(19%).
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