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The supplied flow chart depicts the three various stages which is crucial for recycling of glass bottles.

The supplied flow chart depicts the three various stages which is crucial for recycling of glass bottles. yYrJ

The supplied flow chart depicts the three various stages which is crucial for recycling of glass bottles. In the beginning stage, the glass bottles are collect at the collecting point and placed into truck for transferring into. In second stage, bottles are cleared by high pressuried water to clean dust and unwelcome to unuseful substances. In next step, the bottles are classified by their colour (Brown, green, clear) and entered into the factory then it broken into small pieces. After broken into the pieces, the furnace burnt it and made it liquid then it mixed with new liquid glass and gave it new shape of mould. In the final stage of process, the mould are sent to supermarket for selling. Overall, it can be clearly seen that the process of recycling bottle take time. so, when we skip any step it cannot complete because every step are important for recycling bottle and gave it new look.

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stages
 which is crucial for recycling of glass bottles.

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stage
, the glass You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvialglassurnjarjug
bottles
 are collect at the collecting point and placed into truck for transferring into. In second You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
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bottles
are cleared
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pressuried
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In
next
 step, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvialglassurnjarjug
bottles
are classified
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colour
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clear
) and entered into the factory then Did you mean "is" or "it is"?isit is
it
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small
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mould
.

In the final You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
 of process, the Possible spelling mistake. 'mould' is British English.mold
mould
 are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 to supermarket for selling.

Overall
, it can be clearly
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seen
 that the process of recycling You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvialglassurnjarjug
bottle
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so
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because
 every step are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 for recycling You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvialglassurnjarjug
bottle
 and gave it new look. 