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The diagram below shows the plan of a medical centre in 2008 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given diagrams compare the layout of a medical centre in 2008 and 2010. It is manifest from the graph that a lot of changes were made to the medical centre in just two years time. In 2008, the main entrance which was towards the south, opened into a waiting room. The waiting room opened into a corridor towards the north. There was a reception in the waiting room, behind which there was a staff room, which also opened into the corridor. Towards the right of the waiting room and the southeast corner of the whole building was the laboratory, which also had its access from the waiting room. The treatment room was on the northwest corner of the building, and there were three doctor’s offices along the northern wall of the medical centre, all of which had entrance through the corridor. There was vacant space on the northeast and southwest corner of the building. In 2010, in the southwest corner a mother and child room, and an education room were made, whereas a store was constructed in the northeast corner. The doctor’s offices were made smaller and instead of three, there were four small doctor’s offices. A pharmacy was also opened just behind the laboratory. This pharmacy opened into the corridor. The laboratory was given another access through the corridor. The rest of the plan was the same as in 2008. Overall, the medical centre witnessed many additions in a period of two years.
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medical
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centre
in 2008 and 2010. It
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manifest
from the graph that
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a lot of
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changes
were made
to the
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medical
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centre
in
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just
two years time.

In 2008, the main entrance which was towards the south, opened into a
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waiting
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room
. The
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waiting
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room
opened into a
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corridor
towards the north. There was a reception in the
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waiting
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room
, behind which there was a staff
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room
, which
also
opened into the
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corridor
. Towards the right of the
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waiting
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room
and the southeast
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corner
of the whole building was
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the


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laboratory
, which
also
had its access from the
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waiting
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room
. The treatment
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room
was on the northwest
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corner
of the building, and there were three doctor’s offices along the northern wall of the
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medical
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centre
, all of which had entrance through the
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corridor
. There was vacant space on the northeast and southwest
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corner
of the building.

In 2010, in the southwest
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corner
a mother and child
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room
, and an education
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room
were made
, whereas a store
was constructed
in the northeast
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corner
. The doctor’s offices
were made
smaller and
instead
of three, there were four
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small
doctor’s offices. A pharmacy
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was


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also
opened
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just
behind the laboratory. This pharmacy opened into the
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corridor
. The laboratory was
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given
another access through the
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corridor
. The rest of the plan was the same as in 2008.

Overall
, the
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medical
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centre
witnessed
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many
additions in a period of two years.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows the plan of a medical centre in 2008 and 2010.

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