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The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. xQdw
The given diagrams illustrate the map of the current sports center of the university and future plans of that after reconstruction. Overall, the sports center will be expanded from two sides and outdoor courts on the East and West sides will merge with the core center in order to build new facilities. Regarding the map at the present, there is a pool in the size of 25m at the center and also, a gym is seen on the north side of that. Additionally, the reception part, seating, and a changing room lie on the south, east, and west side of the pool, respectively. Turning to the future plans of the center, apart from the pool, reception, seating, and changing room beside the pool which would be unchanged, significant changes will be done in other places. The gym will witness an expansion longitudinally. Also, a new sports hall and two dance studios are going to be added on the east side of the map. On the opposite side, there will be a leisure pool that a new changing room and sports shop will be considered below that. Moreover, the third changing room and a cafe next to that would stand at the right hand of reception.
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diagrams illustrate the map of the
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current
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sports
center of the university and future plans of that after reconstruction.

Overall
, the
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sports
center will
be expanded
from two
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sides
and outdoor courts on the East and West
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sides
will merge with the core center in order to build new facilities.

Regarding the map at the present, there is a
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pool
in the size of
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25m
at the center and
also
, a gym is
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seen
on the north side of that.
Additionally
, the reception part, seating, and a
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changing
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room
lie on the south, east, and west side of the
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pool
,
respectively
.

Turning to the future plans of the center, apart from the
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pool
, reception, seating, and
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changing
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room
beside the
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pool
which would
be unchanged
, significant
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changes
will
be done
in other places. The gym will witness an expansion
longitudinally
.
Also
, a new
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sports
hall and two dance studios are going to be
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added
on the east side of the map. On the opposite side, there will be a leisure
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pool
that a new
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changing
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room
and
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sports
shop will
be considered
below that.
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, the third
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changing
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room
and a
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cafe
next
to that would stand at the right hand of reception.
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IELTS academic The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

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