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The supplied chart illustrates the data about the amount of waste of unhealthy food in gram with a time span of twenty years between 1970 and 1990.

The supplied chart illustrates the data about the amount of waste of unhealthy food in gram with a time span of twenty years between 1970 and 1990. 2a2Lw
The supplied chart illustrates the data about the amount of waste of unhealthy food in gram with a time span of twenty years between 1970 and 1990. As an overall trend, we can see that while the expending of precooked food in Hamburgers and Fish/Chips increased dramatically. The opposite was true for Pizza. In addition, the figure for Fish/chips experienced the highest rise. In the year of 1970, there was an average of nearly 20 and 80 grams in Hamburger and Fish/chips respectively compared to 300 grams choosing in Pizza. Over the next ten years, the quantity of unhealthy food in both Hamburger and Fish/Chips witnessed a steady increase, there were 150 grams in Fish/Chips and 90 grams in Hamburger. By contrast, the number of Fast Food in Pizza decrease gradually. In 1980, the number of precooked food in Fish/Chips surpassed that in Hamburger and Pizza, stood at 150 grams while Pizzas continued falling in the number of unhealthy food, 200 grams. There was a stability in the figure for Hamburgers. From the year of 2010 onward, in Hamburgers and fish/chips saw a rise. To be specific, the number of Fast Food in Hamburgers and Fish/chips increased considerably, 300 and 500 grams respectively. The figure for Pizza was 200 grams because during the last 5 years there were no changes.
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with a time span of twenty years between 1970 and 1990.

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that while the expending of precooked
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food
in Hamburgers and Fish/Chips increased
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. The opposite was true for Pizza.
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of 1970, there was an average of
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in Hamburger and Fish/chips
respectively
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choosing in Pizza. Over the
next
ten years, the quantity of unhealthy
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in both Hamburger and Fish/Chips witnessed a steady increase, there were 150
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in Fish/Chips and 90
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in Hamburger. By contrast, the
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number
of
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Fast
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Food
in Pizza decrease
gradually
.

In 1980, the
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of precooked
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in Fish/Chips surpassed that in Hamburger and Pizza, stood at 150
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grams
while Pizzas continued falling in the
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of unhealthy
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, 200
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grams
. There was a stability in the figure for Hamburgers. From the
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of 2010 onward, in Hamburgers and fish/chips
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in Hamburgers and Fish/chips increased
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. The figure for Pizza was 200
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