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The table chart give the information about sake of different devices in four years .

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The rendered tabular chart depicts the information about the sales of different devices in four different years. This data is given in percentile. Overall, it is clearly seen that sales of hearing aids remained constant execpt 2004 whereas video game were sold more in all years. On scrutinizing the graph, it is observed that vedeo games sold by sellers in 2001, 2004, 2007 and 2010 with 2%, 6%, 4%and 1%correspondly. Beside this, sales of running shoes in 2001, 2004, 2007 with 1%, 5%, and 3 %respectively. Sales of running shoes in 2010 goes in negative with -1 %. Moving further to rest of the description, it is conspicuous that reading glass sold as approximately the same with 1%. Moreover, hearing aids were sold with 1%in 2004 where sales of hearing aids remain stable with 0% in 2001, 2007 and 2010.
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of running shoes in 2010 goes in
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