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The sunny hills university campus in 1995

The sunny hills university campus in 1995 kY7Kd

The map describes the sunny hills university campus in 1995 and today we can see that car park changed. The bus stop was destroyed in 1995 but know instead of bus stop they built car park and then they built squash courts and after that extra they built students union and bus stop was changed instead of tress and then they built halls of residence and Warson building after that they founder's building and with cateen. The extra canteen was nicer than Founder's buildings

The map This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :characterizesportrays
describes
 the sunny Apostrophe might be missing. Did you mean "hills'" or "hill's"?hills'hill's
hills
 university campus in 1995 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
 we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 that car park This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
. The bus This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demolishedruined
destroyed
 in 1995 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 know instead
 of bus This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 they built car Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).park, and
park and
 then they built squash courts and after that extra they built students union and bus This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
instead
 of Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).tress, and
tress and
 then they built halls of residence and Possible spelling mistake found.CarsonWatsonArsonLarsonParsonWeirton
Warson
 building after that they founder's building and with Possible spelling mistake found.canteencareensateenca teen
cateen
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 extra canteen was nicer than Founder's Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphbuildings.buildings!buildings?buildings:buildings,buildings;
buildings