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producing electricity by using geothermal energy

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The diagram shows producing electricity by using geothermal energy. It has a couple steps to generate electricity. It can be clearly seen that there must be temperature change in water to produce electricity. This change must be done at correct steps. Moreover, without changing temperature it cannot work. Firstly, it starts with a store that have cold water. This cold water must be heated. Because of this it needs to get geothermal zone which contains hot rocks. It comes this zone by flowing through in a 4. 5 km tube. This process called as the injection well. Geothermal zone heated water by heat transfer because it has number of hot rocks. After that, the production well begins. Hotted water is pumped to the condenser through a tube. In condenser, water steam reaches a turbine which pinned to a generator and this turbine started to rotate while steam goes through it. This rotation powered the generator and generator starts to produce electricity. To sum up, producing electricity by using geothermal energy has a couple of steps. Shortly, steam of water which hotted in geothermal zone rotates a turbine which pinned a generator. This rotation powered generator and it starts to produce electricity.
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by using geothermal energy. It has a couple steps to generate electricity.

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that there
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be temperature
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in
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water
to produce
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electricity
. This
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change
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with a store that have
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cold
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water
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must
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of this it needs to
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geothermal
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zone
which contains hot rocks. It
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zone
by flowing through in a 4. 5 km tube. This process called as the injection well. Geothermal
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zone
heated
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water
by heat transfer
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because
it has number of hot rocks.

After that, the production well
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. Hotted
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water
is pumped
to the condenser through a tube. In condenser,
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water
steam reaches a turbine which pinned to a generator and this turbine
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started
to rotate while steam goes through it. This rotation powered the generator and generator
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starts
to produce electricity.

To sum up, producing
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electricity
by using geothermal energy has a couple of steps. Shortly, steam of
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water
which hotted in geothermal
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zone
rotates a turbine which pinned a generator. This rotation powered generator and it
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to produce
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IELTS academic producing electricity by using geothermal energy

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201 words
6.0
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