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The diagram shows producing electricity by using geothermal energy. It has a couple of steps to generate electricity. It can be clearly seen that there must be temperature change in water to produce electricity. This change must be done at correct steps. Moreover, without changing temperature it cannot work. Firstly, it starts with a store that has cold water. This cold water must be heated. theBecause this it needs to get the geothermal zone which contains hot rocks. It comes this zone by flowing through in a 4. 5 km tube. This process called as the injection well. Geothermal zone heated water by heat transfer because it has several hot rocks. After that, the production well begins. Hotted water is pumped to the condenser through a tube. In the condenser, water steam reaches a turbine which pinned to a generator and this turbine started to rotate while steam goes through it. This rotation powered the generator and generator starts to produce electricity. To sum up, producing electricity by using geothermal energy has a couple of steps. Shortly, the steam of water which hotted in the geothermal zone rotates a turbine which pinned a generator. This rotation powered generator and it starts to produce electricity.

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electricity
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 to produce electricity.

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electricity
 by using geothermal energy has a couple of steps. Shortly, the steam of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
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zone
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electricity
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