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The map below shows a comparison of three maps in different time periods .

The map below shows a comparison of three maps in different time periods. 3a8rY
The maps illustrate how Meadowside village and Fonton, which is a neighbouring town, have developed over three different time periods (1962, 1985 and the present). Overall, Meadowside village increased in size and has become Meadowside Suburb as it merged together with Fonton. Furthermore, there have been significant changes in infrastructure, housing and facilities over the period given. In 1962, both Meadowside and Fonton were completely separate with no roads or rail connecting them. While Fonton had a railway line running through it to the north, Meadowside, located to the west of Fonton, only had a small road from the west. By 1985, there was a considerable growth in the size of Meadowside village and Fonton. The small road in Meadowside village had been converted into a main road and was also extended to the east to connect with Fonton. Meadowside, moreover, had also developed a housing estate in the west, a leisure complex and a supermarket in the south. Currently, both Meadowside, which is now a suburb, and Fonton are joined. The railway line, which runs through Fonton, has been extended to the west where a train station has been built. To the north of the station, a hotel has been constructed and opposite the station, to the south, there is now a business park.
The maps illustrate how
Meadowside
village
and
Fonton
, which is a
neighbouring
town, have developed over three
different
time periods (1962, 1985 and the present).

Overall
,
Meadowside
village
increased in size and has become
Meadowside
Suburb as it merged together with
Fonton
.
Furthermore
, there have been significant
changes
in infrastructure, housing and facilities over the period
given
.

In 1962, both
Meadowside
and
Fonton
were completely separate with no
roads
or rail connecting them. While
Fonton
had a railway line running through it to the north,
Meadowside
, located to the west of
Fonton
,
only
had a
small
road
from the west.

By 1985, there was a considerable growth in the size of
Meadowside
village
and
Fonton
. The
small
road
in
Meadowside
village
had
been converted
into a main
road
and was
also
extended to the east to connect with
Fonton
.
Meadowside
,
moreover
, had
also
developed a housing estate in the west, a leisure complex and a supermarket in the south.

Currently
, both
Meadowside
, which is
now
a suburb, and
Fonton
are
joined
. The railway line, which runs through
Fonton
, has
been extended
to the west where a train station has
been built
. To the north of the station, a hotel has
been constructed
and opposite the station, to the south, there is
now
a business park.
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