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The map below shows a comparison of three maps in different time periods. 3a8rY
The maps illustrate how Meadowside village and Fonton, which is a neighbouring town, have developed over three different time periods (1962, 1985 and the present). Overall, Meadowside village increased in size and has become Meadowside Suburb as it merged together with Fonton. Furthermore, there have been significant changes in infrastructure, housing and facilities over the period given. In 1962, both Meadowside and Fonton were completely separate with no roads or rail connecting them. While Fonton had a railway line running through it to the north, Meadowside, located to the west of Fonton, only had a small road from the west. By 1985, there was a considerable growth in the size of Meadowside village and Fonton. The small road in Meadowside village had been converted into a main road and was also extended to the east to connect with Fonton. Meadowside, moreover, had also developed a housing estate in the west, a leisure complex and a supermarket in the south. Currently, both Meadowside, which is now a suburb, and Fonton are joined. The railway line, which runs through Fonton, has been extended to the west where a train station has been built. To the north of the station, a hotel has been constructed and opposite the station, to the south, there is now a business park.
The maps illustrate how
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Meadowside
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village
and
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Fonton
, which is a
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neighbouring
town, have developed over three
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different
time periods (1962, 1985 and the present).

Overall
,
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Meadowside
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village
increased in size and has become
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Meadowside
Suburb as it merged together with
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Fonton
.
Furthermore
, there have been significant
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changes
in infrastructure, housing and facilities over the period
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given
.

In 1962, both
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Meadowside
and
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Fonton
were completely separate with no
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roads
or rail connecting them. While
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Fonton
had a railway line running through it to the north,
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Meadowside
, located to the west of
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Fonton
,
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only
had a
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small
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road
from the west.

By 1985, there was a considerable growth in the size of
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Meadowside
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village
and
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Fonton
. The
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small
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road
in
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Meadowside
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village
had
been converted
into a main
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road
and was
also
extended to the east to connect with
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Fonton
.
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Meadowside
,
moreover
, had
also
developed a housing estate in the west, a leisure complex and a supermarket in the south.

Currently
, both
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Meadowside
, which is
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now
a suburb, and
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Fonton
are
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joined
. The railway line, which runs through
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Fonton
, has
been extended
to the west where a train station has
been built
. To the north of the station, a hotel has
been constructed
and opposite the station, to the south, there is
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now
a business park.

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