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The Shows how Ethanol vfuel is produced from corn

The Shows how Ethanol vfuel is produced from corn JL16D
The given flow chart illustrates the production of ethanol fuel from corn. First step is the storage of corn and the last step is the transporting of ethanol fuel. Firstly, corn is stored, then the process of milling Of stored corn takes place; followed By the step of cooking for four hours in which water is added. Following step, Includes fermenting for 48 hours. Further, subsequent step includes separation of liquid and solid byproduct. Afterwards, the liquid from the previous step is pured. Purifying of ethanol takes place for 5 hours. Then, the former liquid is stored. The last step includes the transportation of ethanol fuel. Overall, a total of nine steps take place In the production of ethanol fuel from corn. Also, Some of the individual processes take hours To complete such as cooking, fermenting and purifying
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corn
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in which water is
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