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The results obtained from the preliminary analysis of majors were chosen to study are shown figure 1 and 2. Strong evidence of business major was found when it remained the most popular choice for students in two terms (around 50%). Meanwhile, the number of international students from the Engineering faculty still retain about 25% in two terms. Moreover, the observed difference of science and computing major between term 1 and 2 in this study was not significant (approximately 5%). It can therefore be assumed that over two semesters, all four faculties did not exhibit a marked change in student interest.

The results obtained from the preliminary analysis of majors were chosen to study are shown figure 1 and 2. Strong evidence of business major was found when it remained the most popular choice for students in two terms (around 50%). Meanwhile, the number of international students from the Engineering faculty still retain about 25% in two terms. Moreover, the observed difference of science and computing major between term 1 and 2 in this study was not significant (approximately 5%). It can therefore be assumed that over two semesters, all four faculties did not exhibit a marked change in student interest. EwM2Q
The results obtained from the preliminary analysis of majors were chosen to study are shown figure 1 and 2. Strong evidence of business major was found when it remained the most popular choice for students in two terms (around 50%). Meanwhile, the number of international students from the Engineering faculty still retain about 25% in two terms. Moreover, the observed difference of science and computing major between term 1 and 2 in this study was not significant (approximately 5%). It can therefore be assumed that over two semesters, all four faculties did not exhibit a marked change in student interest.
The results obtained from the preliminary analysis of majors
were chosen
to study
are shown
figure 1 and 2.

Strong evidence of business major
was found
when it remained the most popular choice for

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students
in two terms (around 50%). Meanwhile, the number of international students from the

Engineering faculty
still
retain about 25% in two terms.
Moreover
, the observed difference of

science and computing major between term 1 and 2 in this study was not significant (approximately

5%). It can
therefore
be assumed
that over two semesters, all four faculties did not exhibit a
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marked


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change
in student interest.
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