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The graph is illustrates differences of spending for books in 4 different country for 5 years

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The line graph demonstrates amount of money which is spent on books in four different countries for six years. Overall, Germany's population have spent more money for books compared to other three countries. However, the disburse of Austria for books is very less as opposed to Germany. In detail, in 1995 Germany spent 30 millions dollar for books. In addition, France's and Italy's spendings have little bit difference and Germany's disburse for books is nearly 80 millions dollar. Furthermore, in 1997 Austria used up approximately 35 millions dollar for books and Italy spend nearly 56 millions dollar. In same year, France spent about 58 millions dollar for books and Germany's spending was approximately 98 millions dollar.
The line graph demonstrates amount of money which is
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In detail, in 1995 Germany
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difference and Germany's disburse for
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, in 1997 Austria
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for
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about 58
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IELTS academic The graph is illustrates differences of spending for books in 4 different country for 5 years

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