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Look at the two maps of Sunnyhi/ls University campus in 1995 and today.

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The two maps show changes to the campus of Synnyhills University between 1995 and today. The car park is removed with main recpetion, the bus top is replace with the car park. The watson building is increased in size. The laboratories is built this year. All the pine trees in the left-hand are removed with two halls of residence. The hall os residence is replace with Arts building. The pine trees in the top-right hand wer removed with bus stop and Studens' union. The football pitch, tennis courts and gym are replace with Pond and pine trees. The students' in front of the founder; s building is removed with cafe on founder's buildiing and squash courts Gym next to student union.
The two maps
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to the campus of
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Synnyhills
University between 1995 and
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today
. The car park is
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removed
with main
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recpetion
, the bus top is
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with the car park.
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The
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building
is increased
in size.
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The
laboratories
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is
built this year. All the pine trees in the
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left
-hand are
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with two halls of residence. The hall
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os
residence is
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with Arts building. The pine trees in the top-right hand
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wer
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with bus
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stop
and
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Studens
' union.
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The
football pitch, tennis courts and gym are
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replace
with Pond and pine trees.
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The
students' in front of the founder; s building is
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buildiing
and squash courts Gym
next
to student union.
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IELTS academic Look at the two maps of Sunnyhi/ls University campus in 1995 and today.

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