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book spending in 5 different year for 4 countries

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The line graph demonstrates amount of money which is spent on books in four different countries for six years. Overall, Germany's population have spent more money for books compared to other three countries. However, the disburse of Austria for books is very less as opposed to Germany. In detail, in 1995 Germany spent 30 millions dollar for books. In addition, France's and Italy's spendings have little bit difference and Germany's disburse for books is nearly 80 millions dollar. Furthermore, in 1997 Austria used up approximately 35 millions dollar for books and Italy spend nearly 56 millions dollar. In same year, France spent about 58 millions dollar for books and Germany's spending was approximately 88 millions dollar. Moreover, in 2005 Austria's spending raise compared to other years and in same year France spent 74 millions dollar for books. Moreover, Italy used 62 millions dollar and Germany utilized 94 millions dollar

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