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Diagram below shows the tiny town of Headly village

Diagram below shows the tiny town of Headly village 73VAA
The given set of maps shows how the small town of Headly village merged to the Fronton city from 1925 to 1975 till today. It can be seen that in 1925, a narrow road is passing through the Headly village, which is at the center of the map. On the eastern side, one railway line is passing through the Fronton city from west to north direction. There was no connection between the Headly village and the Fronton city. While in 1875, both were increased in area by more than two times. The road of the Headly village is broader and it also connected to the Fronton city. Housing estate and Leisure center constructed at the north-west side and north-east side respectively in the Headly village. There was also a local shop opposite the housing estate. Today, the Headly village is changed to a suburbs, and it is merged to the Fronton city. The housing estate is marginally increased in size. The local shop area is changed to a supermarket area, whereas there is no change in Leisure center. A new railway line from Fronton city connected to the railway station which is at the center. Hotel and Business park are constructed at the behind and opposite of the railway station respectively. To summarize, It is clear that there is significant growth in development in Headly village and the Fronton city from 1925 to till now.
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in Leisure center. A new
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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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