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The bar chart summarizes number of visitors in millions who visited three museums - National Gallery, Vicitoria and Albert Museum and British Musuem between years 2007 to 2012.

The bar chart summarizes number of visitors in millions who visited three museums - National Gallery, Vicitoria and Albert Museum and British Musuem between years 2007 to 2012. PgW3j
The bar chart summarizes number of visitors in millions who visited three museums - National Gallery, Vicitoria and Albert Museum and British Musuem between years 2007 to 2012. National Gallery had about 6 million visitors in year 2007, and number of visitors increased to 8 million visitors in 2009 incrementlaly. Number of visitors rose to 12 million in year 2010 and it remained the same in 2011. In year 2012, number of visitors again rose to more than 15 million in year 2012. British Musenm had about 12 million visitors during the year 2007. During Year 2008, number of visitors almost halved to 6 million. During 2009, the number of visitors remained same at 6 million. From 2010 to 2012 there was doubling of number of visitors with almsot 14 million visitors in 2012. Victoria and Albert Museum had about 14 million visitors in both 2007 and 2008. It decreased in years 2009 and in 2010 ending with 6 million visitors in 2010. Number of visitors again increased in 2011 and in 2012 edning with 10 million visitors in 2012. From the bar graph shown here I can conclude that number of visitors to National Gallery has either increased year on year or remained the same. As of year 2012, National Gallery has highest number of visitors. As of 2012 British Museum was the second most popular museum followed by Victoria and Albert Museum.
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2012. National
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2007, and
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rose to 12
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again rose to more than 15
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Victoria and Albert
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had about 14
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in both 2007 and 2008. It decreased in years 2009 and in 2010 ending with 6
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From the bar graph shown here I can conclude that
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was the second most popular
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followed by Victoria and Albert
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