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The rendered line graph revealed the information about the average number of vietnamese scholars who were studying in three different countries from 2000 to 2015 .The data has been measured in millions.

The rendered line graph revealed the information about the average number of vietnamese scholars who were studying in three different countries from 2000 to 2015. The data has been measured in millions. 2RAOb
As per the line chart, it is apparent that in America number of students, it began at around 2 millions then slightly increased with 3 millions in the 2010. After that, there was no change and reached at 5 millions in the last year. In France, it stood with almost 4 millions and slightly decreased around with 3 millions in 2005. There was no change from 2005 to 2010. Besides this, it was followed the upward trend with near about 5 millions in 2015. Moving further, in Russia, it started from 3 million continuously slightly fell down with about 2 millions in 2010and increased with near about 3 millions in the 2015
As per the line chart, it is apparent that in America number of students, it began at around 2
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in the 2010. After that, there was no
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and reached at 5
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in the last year. In France, it stood with almost 4
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and
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decreased around with 3
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in 2005. There was no
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from 2005 to 2010.
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in 2015. Moving
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, in Russia, it
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from 3
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continuously
slightly
fell down with about 2
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in 2010and increased with near about 3
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in the 2015
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IELTS academic The rendered line graph revealed the information about the average number of vietnamese scholars who were studying in three different countries from 2000 to 2015. The data has been measured in millions.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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