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The line graph illustrates the number of UK residents who visit Australia and New Zealand between 1975 and 2005, while the bar chart gives information about how many people from Common countries traveled to Australia and New Zealand in 2005.

The line graph illustrates the number of UK residents who visit Australia and New Zealand between 1975 and 2005, while the bar chart gives information about how many people from Common countries traveled to Australia and New Zealand in 2005. Overall, there was an increase in the number of visits to Australia. In contrast, there were fallen visits visit New Zealand over the given period. In addition, the most popular people visiting Australia and New Zealand in 2005 were South Korea. In the line graph, the number of visitors going to Australia began at 10 million in 1975. There was a rose significantly of around 7 million people from 1975 to 1990, which was followed by a decrease slightly to 13 million visitors in 1995 and rose significantly to reach over 20 million in 2005. On the other hand, around 20 million overseas visitors came to New Zealand in the first year and fell significantly to reach over 10 million in 2005. As can be seen from the chart, in 2005, Australia was visited by around 4 million South Korean people, which was lower than the number of South Korean people who visit New Zealand, at around 5 million. Followed by the number of Japanese to Australia in 2005 was nearly 4 million, which was 1 million higher than that to New Zealand. The number of Britain people who visit Australia was nearly 3 million and a higher number than in New Zealand. The least Common country that traveled to Australia and New Zealand in 2005 was Canada. The number of Canadian visitors to Australia was just under 1 million and to New Zealand was higher at around 1 million.

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