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The given chart illustates how to recycling the waste paper. There are 5 stages, begining with collection those paper and ending with putting the paper in the paper making machine. Fristly, the paper is collected from some puplic banks, office or businesses. Secondly, it is sorted by hand and the paper which is graded and unsuitable is delivered to the another factory. Then, the paper which is selected is removed to the paper mill where is wasted. The next stage is cleaning, all the materials which do not need is cleaned and pulped and removed such as staples, iron, … After that, the ink and glue which sticks in the paper is wasted too. The last stage is delivering the paper to the machine which has manufacture is making usable paper and the brand new paper is borned by the collected, old paper.
The
given
chart
illustates
how to recycling the waste paper. There are 5 stages,
begining
with collection those paper and ending with putting the paper in the paper making machine.

Fristly
, the paper
is collected
from
some
puplic
banks, office or businesses.
Secondly
, it
is sorted
by hand and the paper which
is graded
and unsuitable
is delivered
to the another factory. Then, the paper which
is selected
is removed
to the paper mill where
is wasted
. The
next
stage is cleaning, all the materials which do not need
is cleaned
and pulped and removed such as staples, iron, … After that, the ink and glue which sticks in the paper
is wasted
too. The last stage is delivering the paper to the machine which has manufacture is making usable paper and the
brand new
paper is
borned
by the collected,
old
paper.
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IELTS academic Write at least 150 words. You should spend 20 minutes on this task.

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  American English
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143 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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