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Diagram represents water treatment plant

Diagram represents water treatment plant 8dBoP

The diagram illustrates that water undergoes in various procedure to get purified. Overall this process includes the five major steps. At the first, unpotable drinking water is taken from the lake or reservoir. Then it goes to long pipe which connects it to the coagulation chamber. In this alum and some other particles is added to remove the dirt and all unsuitable elements that are harmful. They all are combine to make a minut particles known as "floc" which leads to the attachment of unwanted particles. There weight is increased so that make them to settle down at the low level during the sedimentation. After that water is clear then it go towards the filteration part. It is penultimate step where the different kinds of filters made up of sand, gravel and charcoal that is beneficial for separate tiny particles that are unfit. Later, chlorine is mixed and it act like a disinfectant to kill the micro organisms. In the ultimate step when it gets purify, tank is used to store the drinking water and from where it supplies to homes, business communities.

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water
 undergoes in various procedure to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 purified. Overall
 this process includes the five major steps.

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 them to settle down at the low level during the sedimentation.

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water
 is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 then it go towards the Possible spelling mistake found.filtration
filteration
 part. It is penultimate step where the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 kinds of filters made up of sand, gravel and charcoal that is
 beneficial for separate tiny You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspeckfragmentmoleculegrainfleckmite
particles
 that are unfit. Later, chlorine is mixed
 and it Did you mean "acts"?acts
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 like a disinfectant to kill the This word is normally spelled as one.microorganisms
micro organisms
.

In the ultimate step when it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
 purify, tank is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to store the drinking You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 and from where it supplies to homes, business communities. 