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The graph shows manufacturing of cars by four companies in the US.

The graph shows manufacturing of cars by four companies in the US. D2e87
The line graph compares the time taken by four companies, namely General Motors, Ford, Toyota and Honda to manufacture cars in the US from 1998 to 2005. Overall, the average time taken by all companies, despite aa number of fluctuations, decreased with the passage of time. In 1998, General Motors took 32 hours for the production of a car; meanwhile, the time consumed by Ford was 28 hours. Surprisingly, in 2001, this trend almost reversed as General Motors took 27 hours for manufacturing a car, whereas time for Ford car increased to 31 hours. Interestingly, up to 2005, the average time for manufacturing of General Motors and Ford declined sharply to 22 and 21 hours respectively. Probing further, both Toyota and Honda took 22 hours per vehicle in 1998, experiencing sharp fluctuations, especially in the years of 1999 and 2000. It was in the 2002, when they again took equal time of 24 hours for manufacturing a car, before reaching a much lower production time of 20 hours in 2005
The line graph compares the
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taken by four
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companies
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General
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Motors
,
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, Toyota and Honda to manufacture
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cars
in the US from 1998 to 2005.

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taken by all
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companies
, despite
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number of fluctuations, decreased with the passage of time.

In 1998, General
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Motors
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took
32
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for the production of a
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car
; meanwhile, the
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consumed by
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Ford
was 28
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hours
.
Surprisingly
, in 2001, this trend almost reversed as General
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Motors
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took
27
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hours
for manufacturing a
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car
, whereas
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for
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Ford
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car
increased to 31
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hours
.
Interestingly
, up to 2005, the average
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for manufacturing of General
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Motors
and
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Ford
declined
sharply
to 22 and 21
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hours
respectively
.

Probing
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, both Toyota and Honda
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took
22
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hours
per vehicle in 1998, experiencing sharp fluctuations,
especially
in the years of 1999 and 2000. It was in the 2002, when they again
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took
equal
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time
of 24
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for manufacturing a
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car
,
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reaching a much lower production
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of 20
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in 2005
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