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Recycling different materials from 1982-2010

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The graph demonstrates the recycling rate for different materials from 1982 to 2010. Comparing all materials, paper and cardboard had the highest recycling percentage, while plastics was the lowest. The paper and cardboard recycling patterns are similar in the increase and decrease percentage, whereaes the aluminium had a big and consistent movement since it started. Plastics were the least progressing in the chart and held a very low move. Firstly, papers showed somewhat steady rates of recycling throughout the years, maintaing 60-70% with an increase in the 1990's to about 80%, followed by glass containers, which had a lower percentage of 50-60% and dropping to 40% in 1990, but with continuos rise towards 2010. Secondly, the recycling solutions for aluminium did not exist until 1986 but had a major and steady climb for up to 45% in 2010, compared to the plastics that were not recycled until 1990 and since then have only increased by 9%.
The graph demonstrates the
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rate for
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materials from 1982 to 2010. Comparing all materials, paper and cardboard had the highest
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percentage, while plastics was the lowest.

The paper and cardboard
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patterns are similar in the increase and decrease percentage,
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whereaes
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aluminium
had a
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and consistent movement since it
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. Plastics were the least progressing in the chart and held a
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low
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move
.

Firstly
, papers
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showed
somewhat steady rates of
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throughout the years,
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maintaing
60-70% with an increase in the
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to about 80%, followed by glass containers, which had a lower percentage of 50-60% and dropping to 40% in 1990,
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but
with
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rise towards 2010.

Secondly
, the
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solutions for
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aluminium
did not exist until 1986
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had a major and steady climb for up to 45% in 2010, compared to the plastics that were not recycled until 1990 and since then have
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increased by 9%.
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IELTS academic Recycling different materials from 1982-2010

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6.0
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