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The map show the developmnets made in a seaside town called Portview between 1990 and 2010.

The map show the developmnets made in a seaside town called Portview between 1990 and 2010. 2lNAo
The following maps demonstrate and overview of the recent transformation of the Portview town and it clearly describes the prominent changes. Overall, before implementing new ideas, the Portview town had been experienced no significant change; however, after undertaking a number of essential steps, this place has been witnessed much more noticeable modifications. It is obvious from the maps that the most prominent changes has been witnessed car park area and the introduction of smallwater holl. Most important renovation is that golf course area which become larger. The cark par has been constructed on the northern part of the plan for increasing number of population. Looking at the figure in more details, the resort and shopping mall have been replaced by five-star hotel and shopping complex. The swimming pool has been change and it becomes smaller. The pier has been constructed on the southernpart of the plan. Interestingly enough, the cafe' exhibited no considerable change over the period and remained as it was.
The following maps demonstrate and overview of the recent transformation of the
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Portview
town and it
clearly
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describes
the prominent
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changes
.

Overall
,
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before
implementing new
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ideas
, the
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Portview
town had
been experienced
no significant
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change
;
however
, after undertaking a number of essential steps, this place has
been witnessed
much more noticeable modifications.

It is obvious from the maps that the most prominent
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changes
has
been witnessed
car park area and the introduction of
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smallwater
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holl
. Most
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important
renovation is that golf course area which become larger.
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The cark
par has
been constructed
on the northern part of the plan for increasing number of population.

Looking at the figure in more
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details
, the resort and shopping mall have
been replaced
by five-star hotel and shopping complex. The swimming pool has been
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change
and it becomes smaller. The pier has
been constructed
on the
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southernpart
of the plan.
Interestingly
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enough
, the
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cafe
' exhibited no considerable
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change
over the period and remained as it was.
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IELTS academic The map show the developmnets made in a seaside town called Portview between 1990 and 2010.

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162 words
6.0
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