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the charts show the domestic water use and cost in five countries

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the charts compare the consumption and cost of water used in domestic in five given countries. overall, out of five nations, The US is the country with the highest water usage while water price is the lowest in the chart shown. it can be seen that usa is on top of using water, nearly 370 liters while the opposite figure is seen for that of germany at only 220 liters. Also, there is a large water consumption in canada at 330 liters and 300 liters of water usage in italy, which more than that in france 50 liters in the given chart. looking at the table, the price of water in france is costly highest, at 2, 1 us dollar/m3, which much more than that in us, at only 0. 1, the lowest price among five countries. however, the price in germany is 1. 35 us dollar/m3, this number is higher than that in italy and canada, at only 0, 3 and 0, 7 respectively
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usage while
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is the lowest in the chart shown.

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220 liters.
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at 330 liters and 300 liters of
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50 liters in the
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among five countries.
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IELTS academic the charts show the domestic water use and cost in five countries

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