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The renderd graph shows the information about computer ownership by level of qualification for year 2002 and 2010.

The renderd graph shows the information about computer ownership by level of qualification for year 2002 and 2010. ldP5b

Firstandforemost, no high school diploma approximately had 13% computer ownership of 2002. high school had been nearly 35%. in 2002 the percentage had been approximately 55% by incomplete college bachelor's degree had been neared about 71%. by 2002 complete ownership had 80%. Furthermore, computer ownership by study level in 2010. no High school diploma had computer ownership approxing 42% high school graduate had just about 68% of computer ownership by education level in 2010. College qualifications level had approximately 89% by 2010. post graduate qualification had been peaked level at 100% in 2010. Overall, computer ownership had been increased. as well as post graduate qualification had been peaked level.

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