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reported number of cases about influenza at the year 1985 to 1995 in the UK

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The chart gives information about how many people from the age of 65 and above to have contracted influenza during the year 1985 to 1995 in a particular village in the UK. It can be seen in the graph that on the year 1989 until 1990, a major increase of the disease hit around 20 persons. In the following year, it continued to grow to almost 75 people- at the same time where those who caught influenza was at its peak. The number of cases then dropped gradually the next year with a little over 60. In contrast to the year 1991, 1985 has counted 40 people, as it is the lowest out of all years. The chart shows that it is fluctuated, as it started from 40 people then it rose to 55, and later on it decreased to a number of nearly 50. At the end, it remained at 60.

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many
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people
 from the age of 65 and above to have contracted influenza during the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 1985 to 1995 in a particular village in the UK.

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seen
 in the graph that on the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 1989 until 1990, a major increase of the disease hit around 20 persons. In the following You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
, it continued to grow to almost 75 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people-
 at the same It is better to use 'time' with the time-relative pronoun 'when': "time when". (Alternatively, use 'in/on which')time when
time where
 those who caught influenza was at its peak. The number of cases then dropped gradually
 the next
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year
 with a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 over 60.

In contrast
 to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 1991, 1985 has counted 40 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
, as it is the lowest out of all years. The chart This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
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 that it is fluctuated
, as it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 from 40 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 then it rose to 55, and later on it decreased to a number of nearly
 50. At the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
, it remained at 60. 