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Through this course, my experience of preparation in traveling was greatly enhanced.

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Through this course, my experience of preparation in traveling was greatly enhanced. I have learned a lot of things about travel essentials. Firstly, to design a tour, a thorough understanding of tourist attractions is indispensable. Learning about a tourist destination includes learning about the culture, customs, transactions of tourists, food. The preparation process of the tour requires me to explore many fields, which helps me to expand my knowledge. For example, we have all gone through many hours of studying civilizations and historical events, this knowledge is something I always get bored during my high school studies but when being pushed by the preparation process for the tour, I actively absorbed this knowledge without getting bored. Besides, learning about tour prices, food prices, motels also helps me hone my information search skills. Second, designing an entertainment program for a tour helps me improve my organizational ability. It also helps me understand how a tour works. In addition, my teamwork skills have also improved significantly through this course, especially in group work activities on tour design, finding information about tourist destinations. Teamwork skills are indispensable in any job, so improving this skill will help me a lot in my future work. Tour design skills such as scheduling, organizing cultural programs, presentation skills about tourist destinations, these skills will help me work well in the field of tourism and travel. in the position of a guide or operator. In addition to the skills for the field of tourism - travel, my language presentation skills (English - Vietnamese) and report writing skills have also improved significantly through this course. These two skills are vitally important in any job, especially report writing skills. In fact, the report has a vitally important meaning in the decision-making of agencies, organizations, and businesses. Therefore, practicing report writing skills is essential for any employee so. A report is a type of document that requires a great deal of attention from the writer or typist. You need to double-check for text errors, such as numbering; using inappropriate language and style; content is out of focus; Inaccurate pictures, tables, figures. Your superiors may look at your presentation and easily judge you as careful or sloppy. So make sure that when the report is in your boss's hands, it's the best version
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IELTS academic Through this course, my experience of preparation in traveling was greatly enhanced.

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