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The reasons why adults now participate in art events in the UK are shown in the table, compared to certain periods in the past.

The reasons why adults now participate in art events in the UK are shown in the table, compared to certain periods in the past. 2agX6
In general, the desire to see a particular performer remains the main reason why people attend these events, whereas changes are felt during this time if there are other reasons. According to the table, 58% of adults in the UK attended art events 20 years ago. Although this figure has declined over the last decade (3%), it is currently ranked 56th in the table. Twenty years ago, the percentage of people who came to these events to watch their children was 9 and 6, and by the age of 10, that figure had risen to 6 and 4, respectively. Now this figure appears at 24 and 11, respectively. However, over the last twenty years, the proportion of people attending these events on special occasions or holidays has declined, from 27 to 20.
In general
, the desire to
see
a particular performer remains the main reason why
people
attend these
events
, whereas
changes
are felt
during this time if there are other reasons. According to the table, 58% of adults in the UK attended art
events
20 years ago. Although this figure has declined over the last decade (3%), it is
currently
ranked 56th in the table. Twenty years ago, the percentage of
people
who came to these
events
to
watch
their children was 9 and 6, and by the age of 10, that figure had risen to 6 and 4,
respectively
.
Now
this figure appears at 24 and 11,
respectively
.
However
, over the last twenty years, the proportion of
people
attending these
events
on special occasions or holidays has declined, from 27 to 20.
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IELTS academic The reasons why adults now participate in art events in the UK are shown in the table, compared to certain periods in the past.

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