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comparison of changes made in two maps

comparison of changes made in two maps Oyn83

These two maps demonstrate the changes made in the area of Clowick Center in 2005 and today. As we can see, some buildings have been added and some of them have been relocated on the Center area, during these years. In 2005, the concert hall and cinema was located in a building in the left side of the Center, which, today, these two parts have been separated and the concert hall has been moved to a new building, locating right side of the map, and the cinema has been decreased in size and instead, an area is added as the central exhibition area. Two buildings, which was considered as gallery in 2005, have been combined and moved to the left side of the Center. In the past, there was a meeting room, one the left side, which, today it is expanded in two different sections and moved to the left-hand corner. In 2021, a new building, namely Drama Studio, has been constructed between meeting room 1 and cinema. In addition, there was a wasteland at the bottom of the Center, which, in 2021, it is allocated to outdoor exhibition and performance area, on which, a stage has been built and many trees have been planted. Snack bar was totally demolished and replaced by a café, locating opposite the gallery. Toilet has been, also, moved to the left side of the Center, near the green area. Information desk has been remained unchanged, next to the café

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