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site plan of airport now and how it changes after development in a year.

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The given two diagrams illustrates the site plan of southwest airport right now and how it changes after development in the next year. Overall, development of an airport took massive changes wheras immidiate noticable change in plan is where the number of gates are increased by 10 numbers and another massive change in the upcoming devlopment is to getin into airport by sky train instead of walkway this modification is going into take place. In the free sapce shops are going to keep for travellers. Whenever travellrss need a refshment drink they can find it nearby ATM where they can have a coffe in cafe. Whenever they feel to leave airport they can get the cab beside of teller machine. However depature people also can get a caffine drinks in same area, while all this happens after the security and passport controlls checkin only.
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two diagrams illustrates the site plan of southwest
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airport
right
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now
and how it
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changes
after development in the
next
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Overall
, development of an
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airport
took massive
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changes
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wheras
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immidiate
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noticable
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in plan is where the number of gates
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change
in the upcoming
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devlopment
is to
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getin
into
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airport
by sky train
instead
of walkway this modification is going into take place.

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sapce
shops are going to
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for
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travellrss
need a
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refshment
drink they can find it nearby ATM where they can have a
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coffe
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cafe
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they feel to
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leave
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airport
they can
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get
the cab beside of teller machine.
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depature
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IELTS academic site plan of airport now and how it changes after development in a year.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
144 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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