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The reasons I choose to study in China and……. Uni:

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First, China is not only the second-largest economy in the world with tremendous economic growth but also a global ranking education, especially International Trade and Logistics. Learning in a country where International Trade and Logistics are booming, I will acquire more comprehensive knowledge of these sectors and supply chain management that will help promote my professional career prospects. Second, I am interested in Chinese culture and tradition. When I joined the 'I love Asia Tour Organization as a Vietnam representative promoting Vietnamese culture to foreigners, I was especially impressed by Chinese tourists. They were so friendly and willing to share diverse Chinese cultural norms and traditional values, which made me crave more opportunities to experience Chinese cultures and learn Mandarin through studying and working here. I was also inspired by my aunt, who often told me stories about her Chinese friends when studying MBA in China, and now is working in Shanghai. Last but not least, I want to contribute to building up the fraternal relationship between China and Vietnam, which has been vigorously strengthened by bilateral trade. After the Master's Program, I will apply my expertise to dedicate myself to my hometown development because I am so proud of my hometown, Hai Phong City, one of the most excellent investment locations for investors, and built up a close relationship with China. The reasons I am attracted to Sichuan University (SCU) are obvious. SCU is a comprehensive and key national university. SCU, with its established reputation in higher training, a greatly relevant postgraduate program of International Trade to provide the outstanding resources available at a world-class education, available opportunities to obtain financial support, and last but not least, opportunities to take part in culture experience activities constitute a perfect choice

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