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Chart provides information about fast food consumption in australia

Chart provides information about fast food consumption in australia JwNpa

The line chart illustrates number of time eaten per year of three fast foods including pizza, fish and chips and hamburgers, among adolescents in Australia between 1975 to 2000. Overally, pizza and hamburgers witnessed an upward trend with similar pattern in contrast with fish and chips that experienced a downward trend. At the beginning, in 1975 fish and chips was the most popular between youngsters with 100 times eaten per year and Hamburgers and pizza were almost in the same level around 10 times per year. after that fish and chips had a slight flactuation until 1985 and fell a little under 100، after that due to a signifact plague it's line touch the 40 time per year in 2000 and fish and chips shifted to the least popular one. whereas Fish and chips lost its position, hamburgers and pizza bacame more indemand. With a sharp increase Burger touch over 80 during 10 years in 1985, and pizza followed it at a lower speed and hit over 80 in 1995 after a gradual rise. At the end, hamburgers was on top with 100 times and pizza and fish and chips were in the next levels with over 80 and almost 40 respectively. In final, Hamburgers reached the consuming rate that was belonged to fish and chips at start that was 100 times. in comparison both pizza and hamburgers escladed but hamburgers was more successful.

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