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The provided table illustrates the information about fruit juice and beer consumption per person in each year in different countries.

The provided table illustrates the information about fruit juice and beer consumption per person in each year in different countries. k5R8n
The provided table illustrates the information about fruit juice and beer consumption per person in each year in different countries. It is obvious that the highest country with 155 litres beer consumption is Ireland while with 79 litres the lowest country is Finland. In Canada, 52. 6 litres of fruit juice consumed by canadian people which is the highest amount of fruit juice. We can observe that the amount of beer in Germany is 119 litres but for fruit juice, it is 37. 3 litres. Australia is at third position with 106 litres of beer and in fruit juice it is at 4th position. Belgium and Denmark consumed an equal amount of beer that is 98 litres and in the United kingdom it is 1 litre less than Denmark. The consumption of fruit juice in the United States and Australia is 42. 8 litres and 37. 3 litres respectively. Compared to beer consumption, the fruit consumption is gradually lower in all the countries.
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with 155
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beer
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is Ireland while with 79
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the lowest
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is Finland. In Canada, 52. 6
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litres
of
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consumed by
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canadian
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which is the highest amount of
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juice.

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litres
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fruit
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, it is 37. 3
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. Australia is at third position with 106
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of beer and in
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it is at 4th position.

Belgium and Denmark consumed an equal amount of beer
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98
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and in the
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it is 1
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less than Denmark. The
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in the United States and Australia is 42. 8
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and 37. 3
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respectively
. Compared to beer
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, the
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IELTS academic The provided table illustrates the information about fruit juice and beer consumption per person in each year in different countries.

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