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Bar chart of research students

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The bar chart provides information about the numbers of research students between men and women on six science-related subjects ( Physics, Astronomy, Geology, Biology, medicine and veterinary medicine) at a UK University in 2009. Overall, the chart represents that at this university, science-related subjects continue to be male-dominated. However, women have a significant presence in fields related to medicine and life Sciences. Male's number was about 220 in phsics, being higher than female's number by approximately 40. This is the biggest different in this chart between men and women. It decreased to 150 in Astronomy and Geology. Then it highest increased about 235 in Biology. However, the figure showed a gradual decrease to about 200 in Medicine and decline to the end of the subject reaching around 100. Numbers of students in female was less than about 235 in Physics and it increased in Astronomy, Geology and Biology respectively. It decreased to approximately 200 in medicine and remained steady for the next subject outracing the numbers of Male.
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of research students between
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Physics, Astronomy, Geology, Biology,
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medicine)
at a UK University in 2009.
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, the chart represents that at this university, science-related
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subjects
continue to be male-dominated.
However
, women have a significant presence in fields related to
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medicine
and life Sciences. Male's
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was about 220 in
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, being higher than female's
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by approximately 40. This is the biggest
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in this chart between
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men
and women. It decreased to 150 in Astronomy and Geology. Then
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highest increased about 235 in Biology.
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, the figure
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showed
a gradual decrease to about 200 in
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Medicine
and decline to the
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end
of the
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reaching around 100.
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of students in female was less than about 235 in Physics and it increased in Astronomy, Geology and Biology
respectively
. It decreased to approximately 200 in
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medicine
and remained steady for the
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outracing the
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of Male.
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