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the diagram below shows changes in modes of transport chosen by travellers in a europeon country from 1950 to 1990

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The bar graph illustrates about the changes in the way of travelling selected by travellers in an European nation for the period of 50 years. The graph reveals that in the year 1950 the most common mode used was on foot, followed by bike which was around 32%. 20% of people preferred bus and few among all travelled by car. The data has been changed in the year 1970 as bus became the most common way. The number of people who commutes by car has increased in past years. Around 22% of people travelling by bike and around 18% communicate by walking. In the year 1990 individuals who travelled by car has shown a handsome rise in their number. Around 15%of people travelled by bus and 10% people on foot. Bike transport has become the least used in this years. Overall with passing years’ immense change in transport mode has been noted. It can be observed that in past people prefer walking to commute whereas with years travellers choose cars to save time
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European nation for the period of 50 years.

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1950 the most common mode
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was on foot, followed by bike which was
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preferred bus and few among all travelled by
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. The data has been
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in the
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1970 as bus became the most common way. The number of
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who commutes by
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has increased in past years.
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travelling by bike and
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18% communicate by walking.

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1990 individuals who travelled by
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has shown a handsome rise in their number.
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travelled by bus and 10%
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on foot. Bike transport has become the least
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prefer walking to commute whereas with years
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IELTS academic the diagram below shows changes in modes of transport chosen by travellers in a europeon country from 1950 to 1990

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