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The provided table gives information about the usage of water in six different countries: Bahrain, Kuwait, Qatar, Oman, United Arab Emiratis and Saudi Arabia in 2000

The provided table gives information about the usage of water in six different countries: Bahrain, Kuwait, Qatar, Oman, United Arab Emiratis and Saudi Arabia in 2000 3AwVJ

The provided table gives information about the usage of water in six different countries: Bahrain, Kuwait, Qatar, Oman, United Arab Emiratis and Saudi Arabia in 2000. It is clear from the graph that the highest proportion of using water is for agricultural sector while the industrial use is the lowest. According to what is shown most of the water use in the Gulf countries is for farming and the highest three nations in consume water for that are Saudi Arabia, Oman and UAE with a majority percentage which is followed 85%, 83% and 65%, on other hand these nations have the lowest number of waters consume in the industrial use compared to Kuwait and Bahrain. On other hand the domestic use in Kuwait, Bahrain and UAE are higher than the other three countries with over three fifth for Kuwait, more than half for Bahrain and more than third for Emirates. To sum up we could say that water consume in the industrial sector has the minority number in the Gulf countries, all at under 8%, exception being Kuwait at just under 20%

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