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The chart shows the top ten date-producing countries and their annual production in tonnes, 2001.

The chart shows the top ten date-producing countries and their annual production in tonnes, 2001. Jl52B
The two pie charts illustrate the properation of various region population between 1990 and 2000 The biggest changes of world population in Asia and Europe Asia had 60% population in 1900 and it was dropped at 54% in 2000. Europe's inhabitat in 1900 25%, which was gradualy plummeted to 14% after 100 years This means that population of Europe and Asia are decreasing However, the people were living in Latin American in 1990 which was merely 3% and it was constantly. incliened to 8% in 2000. As well as, Population of Africa was barely 3% It was more than double in 2000 This reached at 10% and also Middle East North Africa had 6% population in 2000. interastingly, North America and other regions costantly remained same. To Sum up. The world population of Africa and latine America are dramatically growing whereas North America and other regions population are unchange during last century
The two pie charts illustrate the
properation
of various region
population
between 1990 and 2000

The biggest
changes
of world
population
in Asia and Europe Asia had 60%
population
in 1900 and it
was dropped
at 54% in 2000. Europe's
inhabitat
in 1900 25%, which was
gradualy
plummeted to 14% after 100 years This means that
population
of Europe and Asia are decreasing
However
, the
people
were living in Latin American in 1990 which was
merely
3% and it was
constantly
.
incliened
to 8% in 2000.
As well
as,
Population
of Africa was
barely
3% It was more than double in 2000 This reached at 10% and
also
Middle East North Africa had 6%
population
in 2000.
interastingly
, North America and other regions
costantly
remained same.

To Sum up. The world
population
of Africa and
latine
America are
dramatically
growing whereas North America and other
regions
population
are
unchange
during last
century
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IELTS academic The chart shows the top ten date-producing countries and their annual production in tonnes, 2001.

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