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the develpoments that took place at the seaside resort of Templeton

the develpoments that took place at the seaside resort of Templeton gYNPd

The maps illustrate the developments that occurred at the coastal resort of Templeton over a 13 year period from 2000 to 2013. In 2000, the town was much greener with a large number of trees, but over the period, almost all of the trees were knocked down and the transportation of the town was completely developed. The residential area was demolished in the south-east of the town and replaced by the railway was extended to the west which passed through the river over the bridge. Moreover, the harbour was built to the south of the railway and the airport sprang up around the school. In addition, there was a factory which was constructed to the east of the river. The housing area and the woodland were cleared to make way for the supermarket and blocks of flats to the west of the river and along beside the railway but relocated in the canter of the town. Lake remained the same and there are blocks of flats are constructed to the east of the west. Roads was built between the supermaket and blocks of flats. Overall, a comparsion of the two maps show that the town grew dramatically from a rural area to the commercial seaside resort.

The maps illustrate the developments that occurred at the coastal resort of Templeton over a When a number forms part of an adjectival compound, use a hyphen: "13-year"13-year
13 year
 period from 2000 to 2013.

In 2000, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
 was much greener with Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use "many" or "numerous"manynumerous
a large number of
 trees, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 over the period, almost Consider using "all the".all the
all of the
 trees were knocked
 down and the transportation of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
 was completely developed. The residential area was demolished
 in the south-east of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
 and replaced by the railway was extended
 to the west which passed through the river over the bridge. Moreover
, the Possible spelling mistake. 'harbour' is British English.harbor
harbour
was built
 to the south of the railway and the airport sprang up around the school. In addition
, there was a factory which was constructed
 to the east of the river.

The housing area and the woodland were cleared
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 way for the supermarket and blocks of flats to the west of the river and along beside the railway This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 relocated in the canter of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
. Lake remained the same and there are blocks of flats are constructed
 to the east of the west. Roads You should probably use: "are" or "were".arewere
was
 built between the Possible spelling mistake found.supermarket
supermaket
 and blocks of flats.

Overall
, a Possible spelling mistake found.comparisoncompassion
comparsion
 of the two maps This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
 grew dramatically
 from a rural area to the commercial seaside resort. 