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The provided table chart depicts the information about the average expent of university students in three different nation. The data has been calibroted in percentage .

The provided table chart depicts the information about the average expent of university students in three different nation. The data has been calibroted in percentage. MoJjo
To commence with, The total spending medim from country A respectively us$5000. However, The state B go throgh, midpoint from accommodation was 35 percent. On the other hand, 22% of food from country A. Since, The nation 3 of total spending amount was us$1500. Moreover, us$4500 amount of country B from total expent average. Meanwhile, Accommodation percentage was 45% from country A. Furthwemore, The different living cost was 28% of food from country B. Movingfurther, The books payout average was 3% from country A. For instance, 9 to 21% of the same nation. All Though, The leisure of the different section was country A, country B and conntry C spending average was 12 to 23%. Overall, It is clearly seen that the highest spending midpoint of Accommodation was 45% from country A. Wheceas, the least 3 percent spending average from country A of the same section.
To commence with, The total
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A. Since, The nation 3 of total
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amount was us$1500.
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B from total
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. Meanwhile, Accommodation percentage was 45% from
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A.
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living cost was 28% of food from
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was 3% from
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, 9 to 21% of the same nation.
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was 12 to 23%.
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midpoint of Accommodation was 45% from
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IELTS academic The provided table chart depicts the information about the average expent of university students in three different nation. The data has been calibroted in percentage.

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