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The provided maps illustrate the change in Shipmouth city after 15 years, from 1995 to 2010

The provided maps illustrate the change in Shipmouth city after 15 years, from 1995 to 2010 ewApK
The provided maps illustrate the change in Shipmouth city after 15 years, from 1995 to 2010 As an overview, it can be seen clearly that the city changed considerably with the introduction of skyscrapers, and some accommodations were replaced and instructed. Looking more closely at details, the trees in southern were chopped down to make way for an airport. Above it, two houses were demolished and renovated by high skyscrapers by 2010. The church was also converted into a pub which is located next to a new station. Moreover, the road for vehicles was changed to the road for the pedestrians only after 15 years. In the west of Shipmouth, the trees were removed and replaced by big apartment blocks. In 2010, a shopping center was erected to replace a factory on the left of the city center. Close to the station in the south, there was a new football stadium which was constructed by 2010.
The provided maps illustrate the
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change
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Shipmouth
city after 15 years, from 1995 to 2010

As an overview, it can be
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seen
clearly
that the city
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changed
considerably
with the introduction of skyscrapers, and
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some
accommodations
were replaced
and instructed.

Looking more
closely
at
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details
, the trees in southern
were chopped
down to
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make
way for an airport. Above it, two
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houses
were demolished
and renovated by high skyscrapers by 2010. The church was
also
converted into a pub which
is located
next
to a new station.
Moreover
, the road for vehicles was
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changed
to the road for the pedestrians
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only
after 15 years.

In the west of
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Shipmouth
, the trees
were removed
and replaced by
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big
apartment blocks. In 2010, a shopping center
was erected
to replace a factory on the
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left
of the city center. Close to the station in the south, there was a new football stadium which
was constructed
by 2010.
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IELTS academic The provided maps illustrate the change in Shipmouth city after 15 years, from 1995 to 2010

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