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Essay : Ceramic pots process

Essay : Ceramic pots process Dqw17

The process chart given here, shows method of manufacturing ceramic pots. The process is completed by conducting the following 9 steps. First of all, the raw materials are collected from the site using a crane. These materials are than transferred to the factory with the use of lorry. Once, the materials reach the factory, they are crushed in the mixture. Further, water is mixed to the crushed material and then this mixture is placed in the moulds, which is dried for 4 to 6 hours. After drying the, the assembled clay pots are obtained from the moulds, and placed in an oven with temperature of 1000 degrees celsius. The next step is adding color to pots. Finally, these pots are placed in the oven and color firing is done. Thus, the ceramic pots are obtained. To summarize, the procedure to make ceramic pots is pretty simple and includes the processes such as, extracting raw materials, crushing, mixing, moulding, drying, assembling, heating and coloring.

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. The process is completed
 by conducting the following 9 steps.

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materials
are collected
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materials
 are than transferred to the factory with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 of lorry. Once, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgoodssupplyobjectcomponentelementtextile
materials
 reach the factory, they are crushed
 in the mixture. Further
, water is mixed
 to the crushed You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactualperceptiblesubstantialappreciableearthlyphysical
material
 and then this mixture is placed
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moulds
, which is dried
 for 4 to 6 hours.

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 the assembled clay You use this word too often, consider replacing it withjugcupbucketurnkettlebowl
pots
are obtained
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moulds
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. The next
 step is adding color to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withjugcupbucketurnkettlebowl
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. Finally
, these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withjugcupbucketurnkettlebowl
pots
are placed
 in the oven and color firing is done
. Thus
, the ceramic You use this word too often, consider replacing it withjugcupbucketurnkettlebowl
pots
are obtained
.

To summarize
, the procedure to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 ceramic You use this word too often, consider replacing it withjugcupbucketurnkettlebowl
pots
 is pretty simple and includes the processes such as, extracting raw You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgoodssupplyobjectcomponentelementtextile
materials
, crushing, mixing, Possible spelling mistake. 'moulding' is British English.molding
moulding
, drying, assembling, heating and coloring. 