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TASK 1 : THE DIAGRAM SHOWS THE LIFE CYCLES OF THE SILK WORM

TASK 1: THE DIAGRAM SHOWS THE LIFE CYCLES OF THE SILK WORM kLW7d

The diagram illustrates a full evolution cycles of the silkworm. The cycle has four main stages, the frist stage beginning with egg are being laid and ending with cocoon being shed to produce moth. The first step which is shown by the illustration is a fully grown moth find an suitable leaf in order to carry their eggs. Then after ten-day period the eggs are hatched into silkworm larva, which used mulberry leaf as its main food source in their growing progress. After four to six weeks long, silkworm produce silk thread that wrap through the whole length of larva’s body. The following stage which shown the silk thread wrapped around the larva turned into cocoon, which has a similar function to the shelves for these silkworm larva. Then during 16 days after the cocoon was completely built up by the silk thread larva has upgraded its features to become a moth, similar to the life cycle of butterfly. Finally after moth are formed through numerous stages, it begins to repeat its life cycle once again multiple time.

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