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The provided line chart depicts the information about the people spending on education ,medical care and pension in a particular nation between 2001 to 2051. the data has been calibrated in percentage.

The provided line chart depicts the information about the people spending on education, medical care and pension in a particular nation between 2001 to 2051. the data has been calibrated in percentage. j5Pba
As it persented in the chart that, on education spend amount was 15% in 2001. However, 10 percent medical care in a pariticular nation in the same year. Meanwhile, In 2011 education amount spent proportion was 14%. On the other hand, In the same year spending amount of 11%on medical care. Since, the education spend money in 2021 ratio was 14%. Furthermore, In the pension spend money ratio was 6 % in 2001. Moving further, similar percentage was spending moneyon 2001 to 2021. While, droped in the medical care line spending the amount ratio by 12 to 4%. Overall, It is clearly seen that the highest spending percentage of pension. Whereas, the least spending on medical care ratio.
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was 15% in 2001.
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in a
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pariticular
nation in the same year. Meanwhile, In 2011 education
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spent proportion was 14%.
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of 11%on
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.
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, the education spend money in 2021
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was 14%.
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, In the pension spend money
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was 6 % in 2001. Moving
further
, similar percentage was
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spending
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moneyon
2001 to 2021.
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in the
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medical
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line
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the
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by 12 to 4%.
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, It is
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that the highest
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percentage of pension.
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IELTS academic The provided line chart depicts the information about the people spending on education, medical care and pension in a particular nation between 2001 to 2051. the data has been calibrated in percentage.

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