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Process of making cement and concrete.

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procedure and equipments used in the preparation of cement and concrete have been elucidated by the process chart. Thus, cement making process starts with mixture of clay and limestone ending with heating the material. While, conctete making needs a particular proportion. Analysing the first process makes it clear that the raw form of clay and limestone are mixed well where a crusher changes it in the powdered form. This material, then, is put into a rotating heater which provides accurate warmth which is laid on a grinder to produce softly formed cement later. Afterwards, prepared cement is packed in sacks to deliver in the market for consumers. Strolling further, concrete process requires 1 in 10 ratio of water that is to be 5 percent more in case of cement. Subsequently, sand and gravel are added mannually with the percentage of 25 and 50 respectively. Finally, this sollution is transferred into cocncrete mixer to get conctere.
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procedure
and equipments
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used
in the preparation of
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cement
and concrete have
been elucidated
by the
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process
chart.

Thus
,
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cement
making
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process
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starts
with mixture of clay and limestone ending with heating the material.
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While
,
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conctete
making needs a particular proportion.

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Analysing
the
first
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process
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makes
it
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clear
that the raw form of clay and limestone
are mixed
well where a crusher
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changes
it in the powdered form. This material, then,
is put
into a rotating heater which provides accurate warmth which
is laid
on a grinder to produce
softly
formed
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cement
later. Afterwards, prepared
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cement
is packed
in sacks to deliver in the market for consumers.

Strolling
further
, concrete
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process
requires 1 in 10 ratio of water
that is
to be 5 percent more in case of cement.

Subsequently
, sand and gravel are
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added
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mannually
with the percentage of 25 and 50
respectively
.
Finally
, this
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sollution
is transferred
into
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cocncrete
mixer to
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get
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conctere
.

IELTS academic Process of making cement and concrete.

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155 words
5.0
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